Replying to Personal Newb Progression Thread

I saw some other guy make a thread like this earlier and I thought it was cool so I don't clog up ski gabber. I'm gonna just post my questions and shit like that in here for the aforementioned reason. As of now I'm moving on from boxes to rails, which I fucking suck at it but ski bumming it nonetheless. Gonna attach a clip of me yesterday to establish a baseline, if there's any form critiques or similar stuff you guys can give that would be dope, thanks.