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Your teacher seems to have absolutely no idea what constitutes proper essay structure, grammar, or content. Grade inflation much? Perhaps because she is young and only recently graduated school she is insecure and just passing out As?
I looked at your essay again and am absolutely appalled that this is passing work in our school system. There is no structure, the voice shifts, grammar and capitalization went completely to Hell...it's really, really bad. I marked it up for you. If you are actually interested I'll send you my graded version with the full comments. You certainly need to learn somewhere and apparently your school is not the place.
Holy balls. I was all ready to defend you and say that people need to keep it in perspective because you are just a kid, but then I saw that you are in 11th grade. If I wrote this for my 11th grade English class I would have gotten an F. Go back to the original thread and read my free advice from a former junior high English teacher. Apparently you won't need that advice to pass this class, but you might need to it to actually learn how to write.
iFlipI looked at your essay again and am absolutely appalled that this is passing work in our school system. There is no structure, the voice shifts, grammar and capitalization went completely to Hell...it's really, really bad. I marked it up for you. If you are actually interested I'll send you my graded version with the full comments. You certainly need to learn somewhere and apparently your school is not the place.
iFlipI looked at your essay again and am absolutely appalled that this is passing work in our school system. There is no structure, the voice shifts, grammar and capitalization went completely to Hell...it's really, really bad. I marked it up for you. If you are actually interested I'll send you my graded version with the full comments. You certainly need to learn somewhere and apparently your school is not the place.
You’re a genius. And fuck that’s a really bad essay.
You had a good idea and they are right that your grammar absolutely sucks, but you really could have put more detail and a little bit more about the history. It's Chad's Gap for God's sake.
dayum son dis interesting fr. Ion kno y deez folk hatin on you growing yo mind n tryna express yo self thru papa. dey sum sqare dawg stey straigte bruh
iFlipYour teacher seems to have absolutely no idea what constitutes proper essay structure, grammar, or content. Grade inflation much? Perhaps because she is young and only recently graduated school she is insecure and just passing out As?
This is why everyone goes to college now. It's easy.
He finished the first paragraph with a comma. Also the essay is not even about how Chads is iconic, it’s just a rambling mess of various things that have happened with zero context whatsoever.
Dustin.This is why everyone goes to college now. It's easy.
If it’s so easy, I’d recommend that you apply to the nearest reputable STEM school. You can use that big brain yours to land a six figure job right after you graduate :)
I can't believe no one has said the obvious remark and the 100% verified truth.
She doesn't suck at grading. She's not self conscious about giving bad grades.
She was on her fourth glass of red wine and near the bottom of the stack of papers. She had read through so much drivel that she's lost faith in humanity and hit "fuck it" levels on a Friday night.
CaptainObvious.I can't believe no one has said the obvious remark and the 100% verified truth.
She doesn't suck at grading. She's not self conscious about giving bad grades.
She was on her fourth glass of red wine and near the bottom of the stack of papers. She had read through so much drivel that she's lost faith in humanity and hit "fuck it" levels on a Friday night.
Successfully submitted a piece of paper with words on it - 48/50
