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I NEED ADVICE on my latest edit (3D with C4D and 4k)

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liamconnaughton
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hey guys, i would like to have advice for my futur videos, what did you like and what could i do better next time? Thanks!

https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/911681/ROLLINGS---The-Prohibition
Oct 17 2018 1:28PM
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SEABURN
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the color felt too "edited" maybe too desaturated? and the cuts were pretty choppy with the skiing shots. B-roll can be choppy, that often works, but for skiing I love long smooth shots, looks like those guys rip, I'd like to see more than one feature at a time.
Oct 17 2018 2:03PM
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SEABURN
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& the map thing was rad! nice work *golf clap*
Oct 17 2018 2:03PM
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liamconnaughton
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SEABURNthe color felt too "edited" maybe too desaturated? and the cuts were pretty choppy with the skiing shots. B-roll can be choppy, that often works, but for skiing I love long smooth shots, looks like those guys rip, I'd like to see more than one feature at a time.

Thanks for responding, these comments are very valuable to me :)
Oct 17 2018 4:23PM
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Austin.ski
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just do what you think is cool
Oct 17 2018 11:01PM
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bueno
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Those kinda “zooming” in or out shots were sooo sick, what program are you doing that in?
Oct 18 2018 9:31AM
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chris.goodhue
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I liked the transitions and zoom you were doing.

I would invest in some kind of stabilization or learn how to use what ever you were using better haha, the skiing shots were definitely shakey, which works in some situations but I felt like took away from the video here.

Also the highlights seemed a little to bright for me
Oct 18 2018 7:41PM
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liamconnaughton
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chris.goodhueI liked the transitions and zoom you were doing.

I would invest in some kind of stabilization or learn how to use what ever you were using better haha, the skiing shots were definitely shakey, which works in some situations but I felt like took away from the video here.

Also the highlights seemed a little to bright for me


I do have a glide cam but didn't have it that day! thanks alot for the feedback, you sure have talent with the content i've seen on your profil :)
Oct 19 2018 2:06PM
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maxlemke002
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I think the slomo videos were a bit too slow, they would look better just a tad faster, otherwise it looks sick!
Oct 23 2018 5:52PM
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Skieralex
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Editing job was pretty good but I think the shots could be shown is a different order. The main shots were too chopped up and could use some better flow like having some of them be normal speed instead of slowed down. Like some guy said earlier the B-roll can be chopped up and thrown together for some cool transitions but don't crop your main shots as much.
Nov 5 2018 5:47PM
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