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PeteMahn
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https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/902163/Queso-at-Copper
Give feedback, opinions, etc. Thanks!

**This thread was edited on Apr 27th 2018 at 9:20:43am
Apr 26 2018 11:24AM
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PeteMahn
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bump, anything would be appreciated.
Apr 29 2018 1:01AM
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dwt802
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That shit was proper, all the tricks were clean and filming was pretty dead on. Quality was nice and transitions were smooth. Only thing I have to say is maybe cut back on slowmo a little bit, but that is me trying to come up with criticism. That edit looked very professional and well done.
Apr 29 2018 5:48PM
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PeteMahn
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Bump, come on Eheath where you at.
May 5 2018 10:53AM
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Whiteout_
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Really enjoyed the edit. My only critique would be that at some point there were some unnecessary fades and that the music was a bit too quiet. Really liked the grade too.
May 5 2018 4:42PM
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LukasSchroeder
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good stuff man, overall everything was proper.
Few things I thought
-Snow was pink-ish in a couple shots around :40 and 2:00
-seemed like there was too many follow cam shots, and some of them were a little too shaky. Throwing in secondary angles/shots that are stable on a tripod can really help provide some uniqueness.
-It can be overwhelming to have shot after shot, some B-roll of the surrounding area/riders can help slow things down a little bit. Stationary long lens shots will have the same effect
May 5 2018 10:00PM
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