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Cadenmccullough
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Had a pretty successful season, didn't film to much but threw together some shots! Let me know what you think and any tips or whatevs.
https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/866861/Caden-McCullough-16-17-Season
Apr 24 2017 11:21PM
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The.Fish
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I loved all of it except the fact that you started a new song that lasted for 20 seconds and then the video mysteriously ended.
Apr 24 2017 11:58PM
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iFlip
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The.FishI loved all of it except the fact that you started a new song that lasted for 20 seconds and then the video mysteriously ended.


This guy gets it. Also, where are your poles?
Apr 25 2017 12:01AM
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leesta10k
Posts: 64 - Karma: 382
really solid edit bro. only thing i can think of is maybe better editing/filming but it's really good as is
Apr 25 2017 1:31AM
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The.Fish
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iFlipThis guy gets it. Also, where are your poles?


In my car.
Apr 25 2017 8:00AM
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mr-mcsteeze
Posts: 487 - Karma: 1,103
i felt with some of your tricks your upper body was a little flaily like your arms would be all over the place and a few handdrags but overall it was sick.
Apr 25 2017 8:45AM
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littleman34
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jumpline clips were sick, and that backcountry flip was too. i like more steezy buttery tricks though
Apr 25 2017 9:12AM
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Manswanseth
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This is dope man, btw whats the trick at 1:02? Looks like some switch misty or something.
Apr 25 2017 1:34PM
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Cadenmccullough
Posts: 628 - Karma: 2,648
ManswansethThis is dope man, btw whats the trick at 1:02? Looks like some switch misty or something.


It's a sw rodeo. I was just pretty early so my tips scooped and made it look kinda funky.
Apr 25 2017 4:06PM
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dan38
Posts: 338 - Karma: 2,130
Cadenmcculloughmade it look kinda funky.


Very Funky
Apr 26 2017 11:19AM
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tomatonater
Posts: 857 - Karma: 2,808
So sick dude!! I liked your stee but coulda used more afterbang since its a vid, but overall sick vid!
Apr 27 2017 8:02PM
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jordanj801
Posts: 96 - Karma: 112
Pretty solid. Only suggestion would be to have the clips go with the beat of the song. The song is just kinda in the background
Apr 29 2017 2:32PM
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pussyfooter
Posts: 11 - Karma: 59
it is funky funky funky
Apr 29 2017 3:27PM
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death_grips
Posts: 255 - Karma: 594
Skiing is sick but edit needs some work. Look at making the clips stylistically consistant, e.g. Using same crop and white balance. Also attention to detail like making sure thumbs aren't covering the lens and that sort of thing :) good job tho my dude
Apr 29 2017 4:07PM
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brockmoules
Posts: 68 - Karma: 175
Really good, I'd just clean up your landings on a few of the clips. Trust me it's worth it, even if it takes hours of extra filming.
Apr 29 2017 6:37PM
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_____alfredo____
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That was funked man try 2 afterbang harder
Apr 30 2017 12:25PM
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WPMatt
Posts: 118 - Karma: 145
Use 1 song. You need to be more creative in your shots, the skiing is super solid, but it looks like every other park edit because the shots are the same, play around with angles ect. Just work on the quality...
May 1 2017 4:31PM
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