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Critique my edit

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Joel.
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Just made my first edit. Didn't get that many vies but thats all good. If you guys can critique it and let me know any thought on it i would appreciate it. Hopefully more to come

https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/863468/Joel-Sabo----Rab
Mar 29 2017 12:37PM
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iFlip
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It looks like you forgot your poles.
Mar 29 2017 12:42PM
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1776
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that was pretty fuckin sick
Mar 29 2017 12:58PM
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iced
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Dad with the kid in the intro was ten outta fuckin ten
Mar 29 2017 2:48PM
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jjdsteeze
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Usually when I see a "Critique my edit" post the edit is god awful. yours wasn't bad. there was some shots that probably could have been left out, but overall sick edit!
Mar 29 2017 3:47PM
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SKRockies
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actually pretty sick try some slow rotations off jumps next time too for style i guess, maybe a switch 3 or a big 1 to switch 3. i dunno
Mar 29 2017 4:26PM
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AlfredHitchCAULK
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skiing was on point from an actual editing stand point it was way better than I was expecting, great use of slo-mo and good camera shots overall. If anything I would try stabilizing some shots a few were little wobbly and maybe experiment with color a little bit in the future cuz that can add another interesting element.
Mar 29 2017 6:51PM
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Da.Vinci
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need more grabs
Mar 29 2017 6:55PM
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brett_fisher
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i really enjoyed that. it was sick
Mar 29 2017 10:29PM
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Joel.
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Thanks guys! actually really appreciate it
Mar 30 2017 1:01AM
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Joel.
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madrineed more grabs


haha ya for real. I'll work on it
Mar 30 2017 12:22PM
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FroesenSkeeze
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That was really good in my opinion. I never knew Rabbit Hill had such a good park. Coming from Saskatoon, we really don't have much around here, so we really appreciate a well-made park.
Mar 30 2017 7:07PM
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