Replying to Video Critique (Out of my element)

I have been hired to run media / advertising at a local car dealership that sells bad ass cars / imports / trucks... ect..

I have been doing some videos for certain cars on the lot, and I just wanted some people to weigh in on the example below (if you would like)

angles / music / vibe / whatever ... I just want the video to be as bad ass as the cars are, and want some criticism and suggestions if you may have any. thanks!