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ascent_studios
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Put this up a few weeks ago from my tip to Momentum Session 5. Filmed there all week through shitty weather and all

Enjoy and be honest.

https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/833659/CLOUDY-WITH-A-CHANCE-OF-RAIN
Aug 13 2016 9:56PM
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ascent_studios
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https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/833659/CLOUDY-WITH-A-CHANCE-OF-RAIN
Aug 13 2016 9:56PM
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.JakeThaDug.
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Im not good on the edit part of things but the only thing I noticed with the film was smooth out the follow cams (easier said than done) & keep working with that tripod. I think. The very first shot of the brothers was kind of dragging. I dont know if you have a fluid head tripod, but I would invest in one. Not trying to be a dick just trying to help, I also need to take my own advice haha
Aug 13 2016 11:13PM
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ascent_studios
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.JakeThaDug.Im not good on the edit part of things but the only thing I noticed with the film was smooth out the follow cams (easier said than done) & keep working with that tripod. I think. The very first shot of the brothers was kind of dragging. I dont know if you have a fluid head tripod, but I would invest in one. Not trying to be a dick just trying to help, I also need to take my own advice haha


alright thanks I have a really crappy tripod that I'm upgrading soon haha
also my glide cam skills are shit I need a lot of work on that
Aug 13 2016 11:23PM
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reecemasters0
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All these shots are insane but I think you should change the song in the first part of the edit. good song but I would choose something that is kinda like the second song. doesn't quite fit the edit. Good stuff though
Aug 13 2016 11:26PM
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bensmullen
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Overall good edit. Songs were a little too slow. Typically, slower songs are better with slow motion and faster songs are better with normal speed footage.
Aug 13 2016 11:51PM
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finnolydorb
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Edit was pretty good seemed way to long for most kids' attention spans though. As with most of us amateurs, glidecam work could be smoother. Shots are all technically solid, I just felt it lacked some creative shots or transitions to mix up the typical glidecam follow cam style especially at this length.
Aug 14 2016 2:01PM
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ascent_studios
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reecemasters0All these shots are insane but I think you should change the song in the first part of the edit. good song but I would choose something that is kinda like the second song. doesn't quite fit the edit. Good stuff though


bensmullenOverall good edit. Songs were a little too slow. Typically, slower songs are better with slow motion and faster songs are better with normal speed footage.


finnolydorbEdit was pretty good seemed way to long for most kids' attention spans though. As with most of us amateurs, glidecam work could be smoother. Shots are all technically solid, I just felt it lacked some creative shots or transitions to mix up the typical glidecam follow cam style especially at this length.


thanks guys

I should have made it a lot shorter haha
Aug 14 2016 8:02PM
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