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Critique My Edits

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uturn
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The three edits i dropped this year, one is a season edit. Any feedback would be great...
Don't Tell Me To Post This In The "Official" thread
Mar 17 2016 9:40PM
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ascent_studios
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First of all, all the "videos" you posted are photos
Mar 17 2016 11:24PM
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ascent_studios
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And is this your vid you are looking for critiques on?

[VIDEOhttps://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/816417/Sunny-Sunapee-Mid-Season-Edit[/VIDEO]

It was ok. There was way too many film burns in the beginning, half the shots you are cutting off the skier substantially.Also there was too much slow motion
Mar 17 2016 11:32PM
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murphyboiiii
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1. put it in the official thread
2. Gotta make sure you can see the person you are filming's whole body in the shot, half the edit was rail shots where you only see their legs or jump shots where they go out of frame (some times its intentional, but I can tell it wasn't a lot of the time
Mar 20 2016 7:16PM
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uturn
Posts: 183 - Karma: 380
the other 2


https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/818393/Dan-Brown--Meat-Grinder-?c=latest

https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/819913/East-Coast-Season-Edit
Mar 21 2016 8:13AM
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