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Edit Critique! another one i know... (Brighton, UT)

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slc_utahboiii
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Filmed with Canon t2i, Sigma 10-20, Rokinon 8mm, Sigma 17-50mm, and a FD mount thrift store lens (100-200mm)

Enjoy!!!
https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/814229/Brighton-Fire
Feb 17 2016 11:29AM
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murphyboiiii
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It's good, the only thing would maybe be split it more into segments, instead of all the riders different shots being mixed up, maybe do an intro with each of their names separating the clips
Feb 17 2016 1:00PM
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HarkStudios
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LOVING THIS. That tele has a really distinctive look with the lighter ring... could you try a reverse vignette or something to make the whole shot more even, and then darken it? (that makes no sense to anyone else does it...?)
Feb 17 2016 1:00PM
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Mr.Penguin
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You should consider investing in a mic with a good windscreen. Overall pretty solid work. Some of your b roll didn't flow really well with the skiing, but that'll get better with more practice.
Feb 17 2016 3:48PM
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slc_utahboiii
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Mr.PenguinYou should consider investing in a mic with a good windscreen. Overall pretty solid work. Some of your b roll didn't flow really well with the skiing, but that'll get better with more practice.


Ive got myself a rode mic I just wasn't using it on these days because the mount for it is super loose and wonky so I gotta figure that out. I agree the sound is iffy and crunchy, a mic can work wonders
Feb 17 2016 4:57PM
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ascent_studios
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You should use this thread so that we don't have millions more critique threads popping up

https://www.newschoolers.com/forum/thread/823407/Official-M-A-Critique-Thread
Feb 17 2016 5:41PM
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slc_utahboiii
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ben_collinsYou should use this thread so that we don't have millions more critique threads popping up

https://www.newschoolers.com/forum/thread/823407/Official-M-A-Critique-Thread


I appreciate what that thread is for but I'm afraid it wouldn't be effective. The format of NS makes it so that comments quotes photos and what not can get lost so easily. That's why I created my own thread to share my own works, but thank you for the suggestion!
Feb 17 2016 7:01PM
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ascent_studios
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StefanEricksonI appreciate what that thread is for but I'm afraid it wouldn't be effective. The format of NS makes it so that comments quotes photos and what not can get lost so easily. That's why I created my own thread to share my own works, but thank you for the suggestion!


true true but if more people start to use that thread then it will grow and work more towards what people want
Feb 17 2016 7:04PM
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slc_utahboiii
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ben_collinstrue true but if more people start to use that thread then it will grow and work more towards what people want


I think you're right it would, hopefully it will soon! would save us some space no doubt
Feb 17 2016 7:08PM
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