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EDIT CRITIQUE PLEASE

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Hdjaiahsbfuw
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https://vimeo.com/152112350

Filmed by hand stabilization so excuse the shakiness. I used final cut pro to edit it and that's pretty much it.
Jan 25 2016 12:04AM
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wisconsinjohnson
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No critique needed, that was really well filmed and well put together! Seriously keep doing what you're doing!
Jan 25 2016 12:47AM
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ascent_studios
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Like wisconsinjohnson said, that was pretty much perfect. I think the title is a bit odd, Late Preseason is just an odd way of saying season so you could try naming it like the title of the song or something like a to of people do. (I'm not saying this is bad just saying thats what people do)
Jan 25 2016 9:25PM
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Hdjaiahsbfuw
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ben_collinsLike wisconsinjohnson said, that was pretty much perfect. I think the title is a bit odd, Late Preseason is just an odd way of saying season so you could try naming it like the title of the song or something like a to of people do. (I'm not saying this is bad just saying thats what people do)


Thanks, I will definitely work on my title choice for my next edit haha
Jan 26 2016 4:00PM
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M.M
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that was ill, emi killing it ahah
Jan 27 2016 1:54AM
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patagonialuke
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editing was awesome. investing in a stabilizer would definitely increase the professionalism of it but overall it's very well done.
Jan 27 2016 4:28PM
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eheath
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Don't crop, thats really my only advice.
Jan 27 2016 5:40PM
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