so i made an edit a week ago or so and asked for some critique and was told mainly try to tell more of a story, more variety or shots, less shaky. all the shots in this edit had already been taken a while ago so i couldn't really do anything about stabilization, but i really got creative and tried to do something different. take a peek...
https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/805045/Chp--1-BLACK-SUMMER---the-TRIP