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Critique my adventure edit

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gooser
Posts: 178 - Karma: 3,613
I am looking for my new edit to be ripped apart with critiques.

Story, composition, color, sound.... it's all fair game.

Thanks ahead of time!

http://vimeo.com/christianraguse/therelease
Dec 22 2015 11:32PM
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gooser
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www.vimeo.com/christianraguse/therelease
Dec 22 2015 11:34PM
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gnar_whal
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link isn't working
Dec 22 2015 11:36PM
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gooser
Posts: 178 - Karma: 3,613
Sorry for the bad link, let me try again.

https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/802752/The-Release---Elevate-Hammock-Company
Dec 22 2015 11:38PM
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gooser
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Bump. Really looking for some feedback on this one.
Dec 28 2015 8:40PM
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1kewldewd
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If you want to include a car you should find something cooler. I did not really like the part where the guy takes a selfie. I found much of the people holding phones and looking at the camera took away from some of the chill being with nature vibe I would think you would want for this kind of edit. I thought overall it was pretty entertaining. I liked the rythim of the cuts. It also had nice brevity.
Dec 28 2015 8:59PM
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ascent_studios
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I really liked the flow to it. You kept the edit going perfectly./ I also agree with the selfie part. Not really needed. Also did you use a LUT? I liked the color a lot.
Dec 29 2015 10:14AM
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cb27.
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Really liked it, I agree tho cut out the whole people looking at the camera part and selfie part. Made it feel corny.
Dec 30 2015 11:00PM
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GrapeHunter
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Ive heard this song before in some ski edit, i like it. Great edit, the cuts were very clean and went nice with the beat, good color (one of the shots looked a little over exposed 0:49, maybe the actor is just pasty), as stated take out the parts of the actors interacting with the camera. Overall very impressive edit
Dec 31 2015 9:53AM
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ascent_studios
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GrantLewisIsDNTMIve heard this song before in some ski edit, i like it.


Level 1 used it in Small World. It's called Rich by Cosmo Sheldrake
Dec 31 2015 6:15PM
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