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Just built my first Website for my ski van project- Need feedback!

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TheStamos
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Looking for feedback! Im a noob, please have a peak and let me know what you think! Please be critical, tell me whats up. Tell me what sucks so i can make some changes if necessary! Its short and to the point! Also let me know id the RSS is working properly since i don't really have much knowledge on it.

All feedback is welcome.. Mom jokes are even appreciated.. Cheers.
Sep 18 2015 9:34PM
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TheStamos
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Dreamcatchervan.com Dreamcatchervan.com
Sep 18 2015 9:38PM
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yasgur99
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First of all, I think it is pretty solid.
I think you did a good job choosing an appealing color palate and good job for keeping uniform.
I really liked the animations of the photos fading in.
I think it looks very neat and professional.
My favorite part of the entire site is the picture as the heading of the adventure blog. I think that that just looks so nice.

I think that the home button felt a bit out of place to me and also you have one already built in by clicking on the title. It's up to you but I feel it would be cleaner without it and you already have something that serves the same purpose.

I really don't have any other constructive criticism because i like it a lot
Sep 18 2015 10:34PM
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TheStamos
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Right on ! I'll get rid of the button. Those pictures were shot by Dingosean and graciously leased until we get up to speed. Check out his flickr page for a bunch more!
https://www.flickr.com/photos/seancrosby/
Sep 18 2015 11:07PM
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TheStamos
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Thank you!
Sep 19 2015 10:21PM
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JibbaTheHutt
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i like it, i do have a few thoughts/improvements i think could benefit it.

- On the homepage i feel like the top black section and the bottom black section should be the same dimensions, this might be achievable by having "van build rss" and "adventure blog rss" next to each other not on top of eachother.

- I also agree with the need for an about page. I think it'd be really nice to have a more detailed page with info about your backgrounds etc.
Sep 20 2015 2:03PM
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TheStamos
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JibbaTheHutti like it, i do have a few thoughts/improvements i think could benefit it.

- On the homepage i feel like the top black section and the bottom black section should be the same dimensions, this might be achievable by having "van build rss" and "adventure blog rss" next to each other not on top of eachother.

- I also agree with the need for an about page. I think it'd be really nice to have a more detailed page with info about your backgrounds etc.


Great! I'm a fan of symmetry and I didn't notice. I'm going put together an about page tonight. Thanks everyone
Sep 20 2015 2:20PM
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