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Summer Video Critique

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Sarazen
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I posted this video to NS the other day and am looking for any feedback. Positive and negative feedback would be awesome. Let me know what shots you liked or didn't like, and any advice on how to improve my work in the future.

https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/781277/Summer-2015

Thanks.
Sep 13 2015 11:26AM
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DominatorJacques
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Everyone is a Filmer now. Seems you are doing as good as any. Some nice shot and pans in there.

Just keep doing it.

Take care and pray for snow!
Sep 13 2015 1:19PM
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ascent_studios
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Looks good! I only have one complaint and that is was a bit too slow and I wasn't really getting the happy fast paced summer vibe that most people associate summer with. The music made the video a bit sad actually but besides that the filming was great, the sound was good maybe just add a bit of sound to immerse the audience more and I really liked the beach shots with the warm grading. Was this filmed in Massachusetts or the East Coast because it looks like where I'm from? Good Job!
Sep 14 2015 6:00PM
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Sarazen
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session_cineLooks good! I only have one complaint and that is was a bit too slow and I wasn't really getting the happy fast paced summer vibe that most people associate summer with. The music made the video a bit sad actually but besides that the filming was great, the sound was good maybe just add a bit of sound to immerse the audience more and I really liked the beach shots with the warm grading. Was this filmed in Massachusetts or the East Coast because it looks like where I'm from? Good Job!


Thank you! And yes East Coast, but this is mostly filmed in Rhode Island.
Sep 15 2015 8:51PM
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mike_e
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lookin good, what did you shoot those timelapses with?
Sep 18 2015 4:54PM
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