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Well haven't done this in a while..... Can i get some critiques?? +k!!

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thisandthatfilms
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https://vimeo.com/127670126

https://vimeo.com/127670126

https://vimeo.com/127670126

https://vimeo.com/127670126

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https://vimeo.com/127670126


Wet Wednesdays: Cali Edition from Jack Atkins on Vimeo.


any help would be great thanks...
May 13 2015 2:51AM
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thisandthatfilms
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don't know why the video won't show up
May 13 2015 2:51AM
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r._ed
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https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/770376/Wet-Wednesdays--Cali-Edition

there you go

that kid at the beginning tho...
May 13 2015 3:29AM
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jackdonovan
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haha the kid in the beginning, edit was good, only criticism i could give you was maybe a little repetive like switch between the rail and ledge shots so it isnt all rail shots and then the stuff of the ledge, other than that the edit was dope
May 13 2015 10:00AM
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thisandthatfilms
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^^thanks for the embed..
May 13 2015 1:01PM
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r._ed
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thisandthatfilms^^thanks for the embed..


De nada
May 13 2015 8:20PM
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thisandthatfilms
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May 14 2015 12:24PM
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cam_flannel
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Like the edit! only piece of advice i would have is maybe use a tripod more or just focus on getting some steady shots, shakiness can make it hard for the viewer to stay focused on the film. Great skating as well
May 17 2015 8:18PM
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Surfboard
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Cut down on B-roll, cut down on B-roll, cut down on B-roll!
Other than that it was really nice, maybe a bit heavy on the head cuts in some of the LL shots...
I subscribed, can't wait to see more!
May 19 2015 8:48PM
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isaacwrong
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I was captivated within the first 30 seconds, really like it! Especially the skater haha. BTW what camera were you using?


May 19 2015 9:10PM
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thisandthatfilms
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canon 60d
May 20 2015 1:29AM
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