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I've posted this film on NS in the fall as a completed project, but I've only ever gotten critiques on it from people who were close to me or were in the project, and I feel like they weren't as harsh as internet strangers would be.
It was rejected from the Am category of IF3, but there's a local adventure film festival coming up that I want to re-edit for and submit to. So please, tell me where you think this is weak, where it sucks, and what you think needs improvement. Thanks for any feedback.
