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Trampoline edit. Any suggestions

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lcoopman
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Hey NS!

I just finished a short tramp edit? Filmed at Woodward at Copper. Mostly jumping into the foam pit. I would really appreciate it if you guys could give me some suggestions (editing,filming,next tricks...?)
Heres the video. (I'm the one with the green shirt).
https://youtu.be/WXB-phQRyTI
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Apr 15 2015 9:50PM
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lcoopman
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Bump
Apr 16 2015 12:21AM
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Mr.LemonPie
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Damn I haven't been there since the ramp was snow flex. The new stuff doesn't look nearly as good.
Apr 16 2015 1:34AM
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lcoopman
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Mr.LemonPieDamn I haven't been there since the ramp was snow flex. The new stuff doesn't look nearly as good.


It's pretty sketchy, if you edge on the roller skis, you fall
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Apr 16 2015 1:39AM
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T-Van
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Media and Art ...
Apr 16 2015 10:53AM
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tcm.worldwide
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That was sick but it would have been cooler if there was less foam pit shots and more tramp shots!
Apr 16 2015 11:22AM
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lcoopman
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PaulBystricanThat was sick but it would have been cooler if there was less foam pit shots and more tramp shots!


Thanks for the input. Next video it will be all on the tramp.
Apr 16 2015 11:30AM
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Steezy_IN_KC
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I feel like most of your shots you would leave the area of view. Specifically, the top of the shot. A little less foam pit action and a little more tramp would be nice. It's a good start.
Apr 16 2015 11:34AM
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lcoopman
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Steezy_IN_KCI feel like most of your shots you would leave the area of view. Specifically, the top of the shot. A little less foam pit action and a little more tramp would be nice. It's a good start.


Thanks for the suggestions. I noticed that I framed a lot of stuff wrong. Thanks for the suggestions I'll definitely be impoving that
Apr 16 2015 11:55AM
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lcoopman
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Ok bump
Apr 17 2015 9:55AM
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lurking
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Way too much repetition in terms of tricks. Most of them on the same axis. Got boring pretty quickly
Apr 17 2015 6:40PM
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lcoopman
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loganschnurWay too much repetition in terms of tricks. Most of them on the same axis. Got boring pretty quickly


Thanks! I'll be sure to switch things up
Apr 17 2015 7:34PM
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lcoopman
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Lol
Apr 17 2015 10:10PM
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MyNameIsDavid
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Just try switching p camera angles a bit, and I know it's been said a lot, but less foampit and more normal tramp.
Also, that song would have been pretty cool for a black and white edit, in my opinion.
Dope edit though! :)
Apr 26 2015 3:49PM
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Daski
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Switching up the tricks and definitely switching up the angles would help. Dont be afraid to back off the subject for a static shot or two, or get low with the camera and mix in a few skate style shots
Apr 27 2015 6:54PM
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j.benziger
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Was a pretty cool little edit. It could of used some different and more creative angles, because its pretty similar all the way through. There was a ton of foam pit shots, you should try to get a majority of them on the tramp, then use some of the bigger rotations shots into the foam pit. Also this song is very overused as it is on newschoolers and other websites. Try to find some fresh stuff on soundcloud to put in your edits maybe.
Apr 27 2015 8:36PM
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Stadtski
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the edit wasnt that bad, I feel like the content was just boring. the angles could have been cooler too.
Apr 28 2015 8:56AM
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