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The Melody, Brighton UT edit critique
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really hard to find anything wrong with this. Filming was on point!
would have like to see some bigger tricks in the beginning, but it picked up before the ends
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Enjoyed this for sure but definitely have some criticisms. Having skied brighton quite a lot there were a lot of continuity errors. It just seemed like youd cut from a shot above the jump park and then down to the milli tubes which was kind of annoying. Also while filler shots can be used well at times...I felt that some were over used and misplaced. They seemed to be put in just because they looked neat. And lastly...The wierd skipping between skiers and features. It would go from some kid on a jump to a wierd box shot back to jumps of a different kid. Just continuity of things really is what threw me off. Hope this helps in the future
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