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You Don't Know- Oscar Weary Edit Critique

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j.benziger
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https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/747315/You-Don-t-Know----Oscar-Weary-
This was my first ski edit of the year, and I just wanted to know what was your guys opinion on. Hopefully there is somethings that I could improve on for my next one. Any critiques at all are welcome. Sorry if the embedding doesn't work Newschoolers is kinda whack now.
Jan 13 2015 11:55AM
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rilesboy
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Watch your framing, a few times you chopped of the skier mid trick. Camera was shaky at times, some shots were also underexposed. Song choice wasn't bad I didn't mind it. Colors were nice, looked fine, could mess with some grading maybe and work on your text in your edits, add some animation. Those are my two cents, good luck filming man!
Jan 15 2015 10:39AM
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j.benziger
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bump for some more feedback
Jan 19 2015 6:43PM
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juicedrummer11
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definitely had a hunger games part one feel to it...shaky

but for real, try dropping the main post of the glidecam a smidge and it might help with some of the wind induced shake by being a little bottom heavy.

watch your exposure too in the trees and shade it looked a little dark
Jan 19 2015 8:16PM
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j.benziger
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juicedrummer11definitely had a hunger games part one feel to it...shaky

but for real, try dropping the main post of the glidecam a smidge and it might help with some of the wind induced shake by being a little bottom heavy.

watch your exposure too in the trees and shade it looked a little dark


As for the shake I didn't feel like it was too bad haha, because I have gotten a hell of a lot better with a glide cam than last year. I have my glide cams post all the way down anyway so dropping the main post wouldn't really do too much for me. And yes the exposure Mt.Bachelor was really fucking with me because their top of their park is in the sun and the bottom is in the shade.
Jan 21 2015 10:49AM
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juicedrummer11
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j.benzigerAs for the shake I didn't feel like it was too bad haha, because I have gotten a hell of a lot better with a glide cam than last year. I have my glide cams post all the way down anyway so dropping the main post wouldn't really do too much for me. And yes the exposure Mt.Bachelor was really fucking with me because their top of their park is in the sun and the bottom is in the shade.


hmm maybe try adding another weight or two if your post is already as far as it goes. i know it seems weird but thats what worked best for me with a mic on the top. seemed to not be affected by the wind as much when you are riding if its bottom heavy
Jan 21 2015 3:47PM
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