Replying to Critique Plz +K

So, for christmas I got a nikon d7100 with a 10.5mm fisheye and a cam caddie. I was excited to film on it, the only problem being that I had no DSLR experience.

I posted here a few times last year, and I got a lot of advice about how to make editing pleasing to the eye (https://www.newschoolers.com/forum/thread/773816/Critique--+K-) And I tried to follow the advice HKN gave me on where to make cuts.

So if you could give me some feedback on this, mainly on the editing. There are a few iPhone shots in there (you will tell the difference) that would be awesome. +K if your helpful.

Link

https://www.newschoolers.com/membervideo/746631.0/Early-Season?s=210908&t=6&o=8

If you could upvote it as well that would be killer.

Thanks!