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Critique My Season Edit?

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lo-key
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I know it's quite long but I had heaps of stuff I wanted to put in it mainly for me to remember.

I'm trying to take videos and editing more seriously now so any criticism wether it's constructive or not helps.https://www.newschoolers.com/membervideo/743844.0/Lachie-Paterson-2014-Compilation?s=217452&t=6&o=8
Dec 29 2014 5:27PM
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gusestomp
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make it shorter, 2-3 minutes tops and only put your best clips in it
Dec 29 2014 5:40PM
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lo-key
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LachieI know it's quite long but I had heaps of stuff I wanted to put in it mainly for me to remember.


gusestompmake it shorter, 2-3 minutes tops and only put your best clips in it

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Dec 29 2014 5:42PM
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boomie
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Way to long. If you want to make an edit for you to remember then make a separate one and don't post it. This could have been like a 2 minute edit that was really good, but instead it was 5 minutes of drawn out video that felt long IMO.
Dec 29 2014 7:05PM
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S.J.W
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Like everyone above me has said, make it shorter. You have some great skiing and shots in here, but you don't need every shot. Only the best. No one watches edits that are over 3 minutes unless it's a pro. I liked the psychedelic theme you had going on, but maybe put some psychedelic blues if you're going to go with that theme. I could definitely see that happening.
Dec 29 2014 11:43PM
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starvin_marvin
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The follow cams are a bit wobbly.
Dec 29 2014 11:57PM
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HarkStudios
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I dont know what software you used, but if you used FCPX there is a video stabilizer, most video editing software either have it or have pluggins for it.

not all of it is shaky, but the really bad shakes take away from the video itself.
Dec 30 2014 10:40AM
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lo-key
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So I flagged my season edit cause the shots weren't really that great anyway

But heres my latest edit:

https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/749284.0/Lachie-Paterson---Back-on-Snow?t=2&s=0

critique on this one instead?
Jan 18 2015 9:37PM
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lo-key
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bump
Jan 19 2015 3:45AM
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