Edit critique

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Some things I noticed:

-You need to work on color correction
-Turn off frame blending when doing slo mo (really shouldn't even be doing slo mo unless you have a higher fps camera)
-Yellow strobing. why?
-No one wants to watch you put the camera up to your neck/mouth and have the screen get dark red
- One thing I noticed was when they landed after the rail, you kept filming and then it got really shaky. You wanna cut that shit out. Keep your clips tight.
-Couldn't really see what was going on at night. The dog shot was a nice addition though. Again, don't leave the extra footage of you moving the camera around after a shot in there
- As you were fading out in the end I could see it cut to a new clip. Fade faster

Keep making edits and you will get better every time!

[tk]Some things I noticed:

-You need to work on color correction
-Turn off frame blending when doing slo mo (really shouldn't even be doing slo mo unless you have a higher fps camera)
-Yellow strobing. why?
-No one wants to watch you put the camera up to your neck/mouth and have the screen get dark red
- One thing I noticed was when they landed after the rail, you kept filming and then it got really shaky. You wanna cut that shit out. Keep your clips tight.
-Couldn't really see what was going on at night. The dog shot was a nice addition though. Again, don't leave the extra footage of you moving the camera around after a shot in there
- As you were fading out in the end I could see it cut to a new clip. Fade faster

Keep making edits and you will get better every time!

thanks alot!

Whatever program you're using, don't use slo mo in it. The sound is brutal to listen to. I'd only use it if you cut/fade the sound out before than. Since you're shooting pretty wide I'd also (depending on what software you're using) use a little image stabilization. You have to play around with it for awhile before it turns out good and doesn't have any screen tearing though.

CameraWizWhatever program you're using, don't use slo mo in it. The sound is brutal to listen to. I'd only use it if you cut/fade the sound out before than. Since you're shooting pretty wide I'd also (depending on what software you're using) use a little image stabilization. You have to play around with it for awhile before it turns out good and doesn't have any screen tearing though.

Ya that it does, great advice thanks a bunch

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wH48GFFhcPw&feature=youtu.be
Here's probably the near finished product, since the snows gone for now

macinnishttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wH48GFFhcPw&feature=youtu.be
Here's probably the near finished product, since the snows gone for now

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https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/739441/ONTARIO-EDIT