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Constructive Criticism on my edit

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rilesboy
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http://vimeo.com/111583582

First edit of the season at sunday river filming my buddy Tyler. Looking for feedback, I shoot in cinestyle on a t3i, tokina 11-16, glidecam hd 2000, and rode pro, with magic lantern, just looking for feedback, thanks guys!
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Nov 14 2014 8:11AM
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casey_cope
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pretty good edit. I don't think you need to add much but you could add some visual effects such as film burns, slo motion, filters, etc. It would make it a little more interesting
Nov 16 2014 9:01PM
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rilesboy
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Thanks man, i'll give those a shot next time around! +K
Nov 18 2014 7:53AM
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Stadtski
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caseycpretty good edit. I don't think you need to add much but you could add some visual effects such as film burns, slo motion, filters, etc. It would make it a little more interesting


took the words out of my mouth. It was pretty good as far as early season sunday river edits go. I also liked the bit of bethel skate park in there. A little shaky at some times. I also would say you dont need any more slow motion, but film burns and other effects would make it more interesting. it was a pretty fun edit to watch though.
Nov 18 2014 9:08AM
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Blurst
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I remember watching your buddy try that front one back three all afternoon. Glad to see he finally got it.
Nov 18 2014 9:41AM
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rilesboy
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Thanks for the feedback guys, yeah we counted all the shots, took him 67 tries to stomp that trick!
Nov 18 2014 11:24AM
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Stadtski
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rilesboyThanks for the feedback guys, yeah we counted all the shots, took him 67 tries to stomp that trick!


sweet jesus. id have given up after like 5
Nov 18 2014 2:14PM
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