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boomie
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Made a quick edit of a local rail jam. I wish I could have had better audio of the event, but the DJ was pumping out obnoxious music ruining the rail sounds. I tried to somewhat color grade with my knowledge of it, which isn't much. Looking for some feedback. Thanks

https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/734400.0/Spirit-Mtn---Fall-Throw-Down-2014
Oct 27 2014 2:23PM
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spencer.liautaud
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Make sure whatever you want to capture is in focus. Wasnt sure if that depth of field you used was on purpose or not.
Oct 27 2014 2:54PM
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boomie
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Bump
Oct 27 2014 7:25PM
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.jack.
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That's was pretty dope man! I could tell you did a little bit with the colors and I think it looked good. The one thing I would have to say is that it just got really repetitive. I know you're at a rail jam so there isn't much you can do with different features and stuff but it would have been cool to mix up the shots a little more. It looks like you had a glidecam or something of that nature in the opening walking in shots. It would have been cool to see some more steady cam shots following the skiers to switch it up from the same tripod shots over and over. Overall good work my dude.
Oct 30 2014 3:36PM
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