Critique my latest summer skiing video

I loved the flowy intro. The shots in the intro were very stable compared to some of the follow cams.

Next time you should try to add a variety in rails. At 0:28 for example you cut in between the action, you should have done this different in my opinion. the 3 different cuts were somehow a bit to much in my opinion. At 1:24 there are 2 or more exact the same camera movements from exactly the same spot, try not to cut these right after each other. The crash part is a bit to long and doesn't really flow with the song. I would have used a curves layer to brighten the darks, because I don't really like the dark spots in the area's that are in the shade.

It took me some time to find some points that you should to improve. After all it was a very nice video to watch!

I hope this helps! :)

i think editing was on point, you got into the songs vibe and didn't over do the slo-mos. fall segment was a bit too long in my opinion too, maybe 2-3 crash shots would have been a better choice.

i enjoyed!

^thanks guys very good tips !

Anyone ?