Poetry.

I just wrote this, and it's my first (poem?) so don't hate on it. Just wanted to share it. Feel free to share anything you've written.

Too many times have I thought about 21, the alphabet that is. U or y-o-u for the grammar Nazis out there. I'm sorry for shortening things, it's just that I like to jump to conclusions before the beginning of it. The guitar and everything else couldn't compare to the symphony of my heart, a beating drum and a fake smile for assholes looking for an answer. But you my dear, I could go to New York, Tokyo, London, or some cabin in the woods, without the monsters of course, and anywhere else on this rock we call home or the outer edge of the galaxy where the air would be sucked out of my lungs too quick to even speak, but believe me when I say those 8 letters of this language, but I'm still quite meek. I love you? Question mark intended, do I love you? What defines sleepless nights because you can't imagine a minute without them, or listening to their voice and getting excited at those vocal chords. And most importantly a Morse coded message written on the back of your hand so you can slap them and it gets embedded in their cheek, so they can run their tongue along the inside and feel those dots as dashes speak to them in a way you couldn't imagine. Or that record by some guy that you only started listening to because of her, and you became a fan, and not the kind that blows, but the kind that flows in your ears like a brass band on some avenue you've never visited, but you've seen online. And trust me, it sounds divine, but what about us? Does that sound cool to you? If it doesn't then what am I? Just some over obsessed teenage girl with and iPhone and a latte, but instead of some irrelevant boy band, I obsess about you. This sounds so cheesy it could've been mistaken for American, but this is sharp, like cheddar and I'm no Dave Barbarian, but maybe we could be Larry and P? Without all the bullshit drama, but you know what I mean. So what do you say? An overdrawn out semi poetry for a boy in need? Or a verbal lobotomy only intended for those eyes I see.