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Adam Delorme Re-Edit Critique k+
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Try and sync the music to the shots. Examples of where you could make the edit alot better by having the music come in at the same time the shot does are. :17, :34, 1:03, 2:54.
What's with the frame size constantly changing sizes? Shit got annoying.
Try and shorten his landings a little. At 1:57 he did a sick cliff drop but you don't need to continue running that shot, we know landed it once he gets up.
At the start, the two shots of Delorme didn't flow together. And the high beat of the music didn't sync up with the shots.
Overall you have good editing skills, maybe add a few effects and get that frame size issue sorted.
One more thing is the music. Music is entirely personal to you, but are you making this edit for yourself? Or for NS? Because not many people like dubstep, so try to choose a song which the general public would like.
That is all good work youngin.
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The above comment said most of what I noticed. Also avoid having one or two black frames between shots, it ruins the flow of the video.
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Not a huge fan of the song but that's not a big deal really and as said above watch out for the two or three black frames between shots. Another thing is i thought a bunch of the clips towards the beginning were too slow and kept dragging on.
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agreed that music syncs would make this a lot more enjoyable
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