"We Really Out Here" - Edit Critique por favor

I liked it a lot but since you want a critique, there are a few things that stuck out to me.

I liked the text/animation at the beginning. That all looked good. I wasn't a huge fan of the filler shots at the beginning. They went on for a little too long and there were too many shots of people walking.

One other thing about the first set of shots is the camera motion. Try to add some more deliberate motion in there. Many of them were fine but a few of them seemed angled weird and could have benefited from a camera slider.

I'm not sure how much color correction you did but I thought that aspect was good. Everything looked really consistent.

For the most part I really liked how you edited to the music. There were a few parts near the beginning that seemed a little off but later in the edit it got really good.

It would have helped a lot to get some more audio in there too. If you can time the thump of someone landing a jump with a drop in the song, it sounds prime. You did this well at a couple points but the skiing audio seemed a little too quite to me but that's probably more my opinion than an actual issue.

It's a pretty minor aspect of the edit but I always appreciate it when there aren't any clips with the audio completely cut. I know this can be hard because of background noise but it's something I've been trying to work on.

On that last urban drop, it would have been nice to have a shot from the first angle that showed the landing. I always like to see how big the drop is.

Anyway, I liked the edit. Skiing, filming, and editing were all dope and the song was good too.

homestarIt would have helped a lot to get some more audio in there too. If you can time the thump of someone landing a jump with a drop in the song, it sounds prime. You did this well at a couple points but the skiing audio seemed a little too quite to me but that's probably more my opinion than an actual issue.

It's a pretty minor aspect of the edit but I always appreciate it when there aren't any clips with the audio completely cut. I know this can be hard because of background noise but it's something I've been trying to work on.

On that last urban drop, it would have been nice to have a shot from the first angle that showed the landing. I always like to see how big the drop is.

Anyway, I liked the edit. Skiing, filming, and editing were all dope and the song was good too.

Thanks! For the audio a good mic is next on my buying list, most of these shots were filmed with only the T3I's mic so the quality was horrible on every shots I was moving. For the urban drop I'll probably show more of the other angle too, thanks for the feedback!

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https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/719013/We-Really-Out-Here---2014-movie-redux