Welcome to the Newschoolers forums! You may read the forums as a guest, however you must be a registered member to post.
Register to become a member today!
Rip this edit apart please (NOT A GOPRO EDIT)
Posts: 277
-
Karma: 201
https://vimeo.com/89361935
i had a bunch of clips and i wanted to do something somewhat unconventional so this is what i came up with.
critique please
Posts: 372
-
Karma: 1,301
I like the concept but the tricks sucked. and could have done without the gaper girl falling off the box.
Posts: 11232
-
Karma: 76,337
The video quality is very good. Nice cam.
Posts: 644
-
Karma: 2,006
uhh.... random war clips? shitty backflips? same trick? same angle? gapers?
Posts: 13975
-
Karma: 49,270
Still don't understand how you have the balls to do backflips but not a 3 or something.
Good quality. Too many backflips. there were a few decent box/rail clips. I liked some of the clips like where you taped the branch and ollied over the garbage can thing. Those would have been better if you had a better bag of tricks to go along with them. those would be cool clips to but in between some bigger tricks but not good to make an edit with so many of them and so little technical tricks.
Posts: 2124
-
Karma: 4,197
I don't have much experience with drugs but I've never had military related visions while trippin. Anyway, you should generally try to avoid filming from behind the jump unless you have someone else getting an angle that shows the landing. The landing is basically the most important part of the video.
I actually liked the random gaper shots you included in there since some of them were kind of funny.
In general, stationary camera shots get old after a while. If you don't have any way to stabilize the camera, follow cam shots aren't an option. In this case, try to get some angles where you will be panning the camera more. One possibility would be to film from the side of the knuckle of the landing. You could also add that angle to a shot of the same trick filmed from the angle behind the jump which would make those ones work better.
Posts: 4100
-
Karma: 6,997
ya some different camera angles would be good, and maybe a few less war clips, but i personally liked them lol. sweet backflips tho
All times are Eastern (-5)