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Spring Begins - Please Critique

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Bhroscoe
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Hey Guys. Just finished up on a new edit and am Looking for some critiques

Shot on a GH3
Tokina 11-16
Nikon 70-300


Spring Begins // Tramp from Ben Roscoe on Vimeo.

https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/711789/Spring-Begins----Tramp

**This thread was edited on May 21st 2014 at 7:53:24am
May 20 2014 3:55PM
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Bhroscoe
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Fuck embedding. If someone could do it for me that would be greatly appreciated.
May 20 2014 3:57PM
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j.benziger
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Hey this was a well made short little edit. The only critique I saw was maybe trying to eliminate shots with other filmers in them. sometimes it obviously inevitable, just something that caught my eye nothing huge. For your tokina do you have metabones speed booster?
May 21 2014 2:07AM
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nutz.
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BhroscoeFuck embedding. If someone could do it for me that would be greatly appreciated.


Done, next time just take the vimeo URL and do it like this [ video ] vimeourl [ /video ] with no spaces
May 21 2014 7:54AM
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Bhroscoe
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j.benzigerHey this was a well made short little edit. The only critique I saw was maybe trying to eliminate shots with other filmers in them. sometimes it obviously inevitable, just something that caught my eye nothing huge. For your tokina do you have metabones speed booster?


Yeah I tried to keep myself out of most shots since I was running both cameras but some shots it inevitably happened. Oh and I'm using a Novoflex adapter but I'm thinking of upgrading to a speedbooster
May 21 2014 9:40AM
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