Replying to My season edit, input please!

Hey ns, I just finished up my season edit. I edited it myself, so I basically did it to my liking. I'd like any sort of comments, praise, or critiques. thanks! and here's a link in case the inbed doesn't work: https://www.newschoolers.com/membervideo/708692.0/Henry-Robarge-2014?s=187666&c=0&t=6&o=8





Thanks, Henry