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DANIELMORTENSEN
Posts: 272 - Karma: 1,032
https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/708226.0/Tito----13-14

Well first off, this kid is 12. Also critique on the edit? What I did bad what I did good?
Apr 24 2014 5:10PM
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cp_7
Posts: 372 - Karma: 1,301
pretty sick. i really liked it. could've done without the ending bail though
Apr 24 2014 5:55PM
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Lou.
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Damn that kid slays. Enjoyed it. Critique would be to cut down the intro a bit, and try and change up your angles a bit.
Apr 24 2014 10:41PM
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S.J.W
Posts: 7609 - Karma: 31,185
that forced afterbang at :39, cut down the intro, stablize the shots.
Apr 24 2014 10:52PM
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