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So I started this about a week ago from something I wrote a while back, I'm really excited about how it turned out. It was my first time actually putting some real effort into grading, and it was my first time using a slider as well. I'm looking for any critiques you may have, for the narration or shots or editing, anything that catches your attention. I'll appreciate any helpful feedback.