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Feedback on my latest edit, tried something a bit different

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StokeFactor
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Here's my latest edit, I wasn't really able follow cam because the station was closed so I tried something with a slower vibe and more multi view, let me know what you guys think!

https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/706678.0/Spring-skiing-edit----Inception-?c=11
Apr 15 2014 11:51AM
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StokeFactor
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Here's the Vimeo link for HD version, forgot that Vimeo embed isn't HD if you don't have vimeo plus.

https://vimeo.com/91988504
Apr 15 2014 11:55AM
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NMMedia
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Enjoyed it. Loved all the different shots and how they were put together. Also really liked how you mixed in the B-roll to break it up. And kept the video short and sweet so you don't get tired of watching it.
Apr 15 2014 2:29PM
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StokeFactor
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Thanks man I appreciate the good feedback!
Apr 15 2014 8:29PM
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caderobinson
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That was sick!
Apr 15 2014 9:22PM
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Spiri7o
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super sick! slo mo was smooth and I liked the cuts
Apr 15 2014 10:17PM
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uni-corn
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Intro was a bit too long for my liking considering how short the edit is.
Apr 16 2014 2:09AM
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StokeFactor
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uni-cornIntro was a bit too long for my liking considering how short the edit is.


Yeah I agree, I could've easily cut the intro to 10 seconds, I like editing broll in general so I never notice things like that until someone point it out haha.
Apr 16 2014 1:58PM
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Lou.
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That was dope
Apr 16 2014 10:37PM
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wellthisisold
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That was sick. IMO the shot of the guy hiking up got repetitive, but it was all around good edit.
Apr 18 2014 12:18AM
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StokeFactor
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Myles.That was sick. IMO the shot of the guy hiking up got repetitive, but it was all around good edit.


Thanks appreciate it! For the broll that's another detail I realize now that I rewatched it haha, I'll try to be a bit more creative on the broll shots next time.
Apr 21 2014 10:14PM
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t_nullmeyer
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nice job dude
May 5 2014 11:38PM
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StokeFactor
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t_nullmeyernice job dude


Thanks man! I appreciate the good feedback
May 7 2014 8:17AM
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