Here's what I think, feel free to use the feedback or not,
Your edits are dope, I like the slow and smooth style of editing with clean audio but it's a bit too slow for a 2-3 minutes internet edit, I'd keep that slow and clean style for an intro (maybe like 30 seconds) then I'd change for something more fast and fluid.
Also the thing is the slower your edit, the cleaner your shots need to be, try to work your angles a bit (like in "Ambient" those night shots could've been real sick if you took some close ups and lower fisheye shots, or multiview with shots from the other side of the feature).