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mikeyp433
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Critique this please. I want to become better at filmmaking so any tips would be appreciated. +K to those who help



Apr 3 2014 12:05AM
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StokeFactor
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Good start, but some of your shots are way too white (learn how to setup your exposure), also work your angles, these jumps in the powder and the park are generally filmed from too far away, get closer and try different angles or follow cam . Also the edit is too long, I'd cut some shots and keep only the best to have a 2-3 minutes edit, appart from that you're on the good way.
Apr 3 2014 11:57AM
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caderobinson
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there were deffinatly some shots that just did not belong there, shots that were too far away, dark, etc. Practice makes perfect
Apr 3 2014 6:32PM
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