too much slow motion. and the super slo mo was shitty, too much ghosting. make sure you film at a high frame rate (60fps) and only reduce to 20% minimum, usually the slowest i got is 35% when filming at 60fps.
other than that it wasnt terrible, but look to upgrade to a DSLR if youre serious about filming edits and wants quality stuff. the sky was sooper nice in some shots too. keep at it