Replying to University project: Rail slide trick tips

Hey Newschoolers,

As part of a project for my uni course i've been asked to develop a teaching resource. So i've done a trick tips video.

In part of my portfolio I need to include some feedback from my target audience. So feedback from you guys would be greatly appreciated.

The focus is really on the actual teaching aspect, so it would be really helpful if you could comment on improvements with regards to this, rather than my standard of skiing or editing skills!

25% of the marks are for "innovation", hence the arrows etc. and the "four stages of the rail slide". I know its bullshit but sometimes you've just got to jump through the hoops.

Untitled Project from Tom Blaszczyk on Vimeo.

https://vimeo.com/89183287

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