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Critique Please +K

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boomie
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Made this edit for a contest. Looking for some critiques for feature edits. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Thanks! )
Mar 12 2014 11:50PM
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S.J.W
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that edit got me so hyped to go out and go skiing, sick edit dude, i'd cut the take offs a little bit and when you tone down the music to do some talking drop it out when the song sort of goes quieter it just seems more professional
Mar 13 2014 5:15AM
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boomie
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Bump
Mar 13 2014 11:47AM
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NMMedia
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I see, stomp the rodeo 5 and don't even get a mention in the talents section. Haha nice work tho man, our crew was killin it!
Mar 13 2014 2:09PM
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boomie
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I know! I realized that after I published it and was to lazy to fix it! my bad!
Mar 13 2014 2:29PM
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NMMedia
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haha no biggie, I'm just giving you a hard time
Mar 13 2014 2:45PM
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boomie
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Bump
Mar 13 2014 11:13PM
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boomie
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Bump
Mar 14 2014 2:33PM
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boomie
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Would like some serious critiques please. Thanks
Mar 14 2014 4:21PM
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cydwhit
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sound fade out to second voiceover was too abrupt, nice though
Mar 14 2014 4:26PM
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boomie
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Yeah I noticed that too! Thanks +K
Mar 14 2014 4:34PM
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caderobinson
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not tryna be a dick but put in media and arts. you get solid ass responses
Mar 14 2014 9:50PM
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caderobinson
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well if i didn't darn just fuck up. sorry OP^
ive been on ski gabber all night
Mar 14 2014 9:51PM
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Forcillo
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Song was good, skiing was good, I think the only area I would look at again is the interviews. I thought you had way too much skiing for two sentences, and that having more talking would give the video more purpose. It seemed more like just another edit than a documentary, and I think it should have been leaning toward the latter. I liked it for what you had though, good work!
Mar 14 2014 10:58PM
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