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.JakeThaDug.
Posts: 757 - Karma: 4,148

Honor the Presidents from Jake Ankney on Vimeo.

Feb 18 2014 11:29AM
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.JakeThaDug.
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Just kind of threw it together in one night. critique plz
Feb 18 2014 11:29AM
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Childstar.
Posts: 1947 - Karma: 2,213
Get rid of those black frames.

Get something to stabilize the camera.

Get music that works.

so much other painful stuff I'm not even going to try and touch on it all.
Feb 18 2014 11:45AM
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NMMedia
Posts: 982 - Karma: 1,700
take out that whole stupid conversation, b-roll like that shouldnt last more than 15 seconds or it becomes boring af. Also get a few tricks other than washed out front 2s
Feb 18 2014 12:19PM
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.JakeThaDug.
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I can do that

I use an x grip. How do i make it more stable?

Just kind of messing around.

I know, I suck.
Feb 18 2014 2:24PM
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brighton__
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Maybe invest in a glidecam to make it more stable?

Also, try using more long lens and not just wide angle. It would make the edit more appealing to the eye. I think the edit succeeds in what you and your friends want it to be though. Just a fun little mix of skiing. You should've made it shorter though. More compact it is, the more people will stay interested.


Feb 18 2014 4:03PM
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