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Spol
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I recent edit from a day in January. I'm looking for any tips or comments on the edit. Thanks.

Feb 17 2014 11:38AM
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Superduploman
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I think there's not much to say, looked pretty good. Only thing I noticed is that some rail shots are pretty close to the rider, head gets cut out, but it didn't really bother me. Really liked the editing, perfect mix of slowmo and normal speed. Really liked the parts where the landing is a seperate shot. Did you have two filmers or was it two identical runs?
Feb 18 2014 4:23AM
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Spol
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Thanks I appreciate the feedback! I filmed two identical runs and cut them together in post.
Feb 18 2014 9:56AM
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Lou.
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excellent edit
Feb 18 2014 11:08AM
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NMMedia
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seriously enjoyed this, excellent. Usually go into these threads expecting something cringeworthy. Loved the pace of the edit, how everything was slowed down a little bit but not super slow motion! Keep up the good work.
Feb 18 2014 12:23PM
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caderobinson
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edit went well with the music. What did you film this with?
Feb 19 2014 10:40AM
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brighton__
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It felt reallllly good for a nice little edit. Looked really nice, filming, editing, and song were all excellent. It flowed together really nicely. I liked the intro as well. Maybe it could've been a little bit shorter though? Maybe it is just me. I liked it a lot though, thanks for sharing.
Feb 19 2014 11:16PM
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mikeyp433
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Wow that was really good. SOme of the shots were a little shaky though, but thats really my only complaint.
Feb 19 2014 11:47PM
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Spol
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It was shot on a Canon 60D with a Tokina 11-16mm and a Canon 50mm.
Feb 20 2014 3:27PM
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LukasSchroeder
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super sick! very nice crisp colours, and the angle swapping in the middle of the trick was sick!

only problem i see is that the shot was shaky at some points. particularly the moving landscape shots.
Feb 20 2014 6:22PM
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skiersupreme
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maybe introduce the riders as theyre seg comes, instead of the beginning so you can shorten the intro. other than that, the squares forming the star or whatever was sick. great job and nice song choice to!
Feb 20 2014 10:24PM
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Spol
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Yeah I noticed the shaky shots. I had to use my 50mm on the Glidecam because I didn't have my tripod with me but I hope to have that next time I shoot.
Feb 20 2014 11:00PM
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