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GANKI
Posts: 76 - Karma: 264
I started this website mainly so I could have an online portfolio for when I apply for some internships. I decided to add a blog and am making some apparel too. check it out let me know what you think and if you dig it then word up

Feb 10 2014 12:41AM
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Laurent.
Posts: 10056 - Karma: 25,313
Well standard squarespace layout, not much stuff so far, too many music youtube videos.

Also if you are actually looking to be a serious designer I would refrain from using copyrighted images.
I mean the one of glamour model Valeria Orsini
Feb 10 2014 2:31AM
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eheath
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I would take this off of your site if you want anyone to take you seriously.

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I would also work on the name of your company
Feb 10 2014 2:42AM
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GANKI
Posts: 76 - Karma: 264
I'm always down for the criticism if it means me making something better. Thanks fellas ^
Feb 10 2014 7:34AM
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gravel
Posts: 5518 - Karma: 42,202
Your logo is not balanced at all. The V is way overstated and the P is pretty understated. Also it looks uneven mixing the "chalkboard" style of the VP and the hard edged circle around it.
Feb 10 2014 2:40PM
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uni-corn
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In the about section, the grey text is VERY hard to read on the white background. Also, don't say "... go skiing with all the homies..." if you want to be taken seriously.
Feb 10 2014 7:00PM
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GANKI
Posts: 76 - Karma: 264
Thanks for the feedback everyone much appreciated
Feb 10 2014 7:58PM
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bigbromskier
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I think that your blog would be better if you added some of your own creations--maybe some insight of your process or current events or something. it's cool to see inspiration, but it would probably be better if you went on more about why it's inspiring. otherwise, it kind of takes away from you personally, which isn't the purpose of the website.
Feb 11 2014 8:54PM
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Merlin.
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website looks good, and your art is sick, really diggin the rob banks piece keep it up G
Feb 12 2014 8:57AM
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