Replying to Critique my edit?

I'd love to know what I should work on for my next edit. I know I can work on being less shaky and not cutting off the skier's head, but what else?

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Also, if you like it, don't hesitate to give it an upvote!
https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/691085.0/Chicky-Parm?c=11

Thanks a lot! Karmaz will be given out generously.