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Critique my edit?

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CheddarJack
Posts: 5203 - Karma: 7,380
I'd love to know what I should work on for my next edit. I know I can work on being less shaky and not cutting off the skier's head, but what else?

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Also, if you like it, don't hesitate to give it an upvote!
https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/691085.0/Chicky-Parm?c=11

Thanks a lot! Karmaz will be given out generously.
Feb 9 2014 9:38PM
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CheddarJack
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god dammit.

Feb 9 2014 9:39PM
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Lou.
Posts: 1787 - Karma: 3,876
I actually loved it. Thought the parm thing was unique and actually very funny. Skiing was on point, editing was on point and the old lady had nice tits so all around solid job
Feb 9 2014 9:46PM
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CheddarJack
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Thanks man!
Feb 9 2014 10:03PM
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seanflynnoh
Posts: 121 - Karma: 910
Sick skiing! and Hilarious! Also G-Sleazy nice to see some G in ski edits
Feb 9 2014 10:15PM
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scarsimd
Posts: 668 - Karma: 773
yeah that was dope man!!


the only slight change i would make is limit how much you use the chicken gag! i think you got the right amount in this edit but next time dont use more of a similar kind of joke!!!


Sick edit though bro
Feb 10 2014 6:50AM
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flotus.
Posts: 55 - Karma: 230
As an Italian, that woman made me cringe...

But solid skiing and editing. Some sort of stabilisation would step it up though.
Feb 10 2014 1:00PM
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BmashedMedia
Posts: 28 - Karma: 161
wow, just wow, I can't believe I made it through the whole thing. I guess part way through I wanted to see if it could get any worse, and i wasn't disappointed. You think you're funny? well you're not, shit was gay, you should quite filming throw you'r camera in a lake and die.
Feb 10 2014 5:55PM
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UVMFST
Posts: 52 - Karma: 1,577
Worst troll ever. I bet the Bmashed crew is just jealous because they can't hang. Edit was sick, keep it up.
Feb 10 2014 8:20PM
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CheddarJack
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Bmashed media is most certainly not best mashed media
Feb 10 2014 8:23PM
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Stimpy331
Posts: 22 - Karma: 75
The Bmashed NS account was hacked by some weasel who shall remain nameless, dope edit Cheddar, keep it up!
Feb 10 2014 8:24PM
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BmashedMedia
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FST sucks, its just a shitty frat and your girls aint even hot
Feb 10 2014 8:26PM
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TheWeaz
Posts: 803 - Karma: 1,903
Don't worry jack I think your edit was cool no matter what bmashed says, I heard they're run by communists anyway
Feb 10 2014 8:29PM
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CheddarJack
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thanks weaz I appreciate it.
Feb 10 2014 9:22PM
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caderobinson
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ill skiing and filming.
Feb 11 2014 10:34AM
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