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New edit, "GREY"

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wellthisisold
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GREY from Myles Cameron on Vimeo.

Any critiques?
Jan 30 2014 11:43PM
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El_Barto.
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That was sick
Jan 31 2014 1:02AM
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mvf
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Solid, boys. Killing it.
Jan 31 2014 4:01AM
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steezysteeze
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Really nice job but when shooting in cinemascope you gotta be careful not to get too tight on the skier.
Jan 31 2014 8:42AM
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CrotchKiller
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2:35 crop ruined it
Jan 31 2014 3:08PM
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eheath
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Yeah unfortunately I agree, it felt very claustrophobic to me. I really hope the 2.35 crop trend ends soon.
Jan 31 2014 3:41PM
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gravel
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I also thought that it was not shot for that ratio.

You also seem to have a lot of trouble keeping the rider in the frame.
Fades were gimmicky and broke the flow.
You had a lot of random filler that didn't work.
Every shot had the same look. Medium-wide focal length glidecam. Try switching it up with tripods and different angles.
Glides weren't very smooth.
Song was meh.

Colors were cool, though the whites were a little too dark
Decently good titling.

^Evan, what do you think of edits shot with the 2:35 ratio in mind? I shoot everything with cropmarks and the intention to crop to cinemascope, does that change anything?
Jan 31 2014 8:12PM
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TomDavies
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sick. I talked to some of meadows park crew and they love it because makes their parks look good.
Feb 18 2014 11:21PM
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Lou.
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That was very well done
Feb 19 2014 8:58AM
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Superduploman
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Shadows were too dark and the cropping was pointless
Feb 19 2014 11:47AM
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Bhroscoe
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Obviously I'm not eheath but, I think that cropmarks always work with your edits. Rider always in frame etc.
Feb 19 2014 12:31PM
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eheath
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Definitely a different story. It's tough with follow cams, you can film for a crop doing follows but its tough to keep it consistent. I've shot edits with a crop in mind and I only used a tripod/hand held and some of my shots were too close. I think if you're into the crop, go for it but I think its a poor idea for every kid with a cheap dslr to just throw a crop on their edit without even thinking about it.
Feb 19 2014 12:40PM
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