Here's an edit for you:
Change "Its" to "It's." Your usage of "Its" is in the context of "it is." When combining these words to become "it's" you make a contraction. Contractions require an apostrophe.
Also, change "kids" to "kid's." Your usage of "kids" is showing possession, as it is the "sick summer" of the kid. In this case, when showing possession, an apostrophe must be used.
One again, change "Thats" to "That's." Refer back to your initial change of "Its" to "It's," as you are repeating the contraction rule.
Change "i" to "I." The word "I" is always written as such, never as "i."
Lastly, change "Thanks NS" to "Thanks, NS." When one ends a sentence one must always use a period or other punctuating mark. I will leave out the explanation as to why you need a comma because I feel that would be significantly over your head.
I do want to mention that I am impressed by you writing "Michigan" instead of "michigan." Good job! I could delve into your sentence structure, word choice, and tone but again feel this would be over your head. Master the basic skills I just taught you and then come back to me. Good luck!
