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Critique my video. Again.

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cyberginger
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So, I really enjoy making these threads, and getting feedback on my videos. I took into mind the feedback from my last video, and made another one today.
We made this one with a different setup, T4i with a scorpion EX handle. I know the footage is blurry, Neither me or my buddies are very good filmers, and forgot to focus the camera. But besides that, What could I improve on?

An Afternoon At COP from Distrikt on Vimeo.

Dec 21 2013 12:28AM
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cyberginger
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Also, you might want to watch it in HD on vimeo.
Dec 21 2013 12:30AM
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*SID*
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ill pay you to make one of those 3d texture things at the end and flat text designs
Dec 21 2013 12:40AM
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No.Quarter
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Every shot seemed VERY similar
Dec 21 2013 1:19AM
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CrotchKiller
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Yea almost every shot was from the same angle
Dec 21 2013 9:24AM
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cyberginger
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Yeah, I see what you mean, we tried to film multiple angles, but they all ended up looking the same.
Dec 21 2013 4:53PM
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Childstar.
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Well the focus was soft on almost every shot, and that end title seemed extremely corny.
Dec 21 2013 6:02PM
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Lou.
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End title was corny af, and all the shots just kinda amounted to blahhhh like it was fine skiing. But it just didnt seem to flow correctly. My advice is just to keep on keeping on, you will get it eventually
Dec 21 2013 8:52PM
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AndrewCole35
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Sign me up! ;)
Dec 21 2013 11:22PM
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AndrewCole35
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The best advice i can give you, is fill the frames up. You are filming to far away. get nice and close so that the person you are flming takes up the entire frame, it looks much better :) also, dont always go for the behind shot, maybe get some footage looking uphill aswell :) another tip i can give you is some motion shots would be nice, where the person who is filming is moving wth the skiier, those look great aswell :) hope that helped, cheers!
Dec 21 2013 11:25PM
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raull
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it was like watching the same trick over and over and over and over.
Dec 22 2013 11:04PM
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