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Check Out My Short Film - The Salesman

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juicedrummer11
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This is a little side project piece we did. A buddy of mine wrote and directed it and I was the cinematographer. Let me know what you think!

Dec 20 2013 12:15AM
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Lou.
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Very well made id say, acting was meh, but you expect that with an am production. I thought it was pretty good. Only critique id say is maybe a bit faster paced
Dec 21 2013 2:45PM
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juicedrummer11
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thanks man! i see what you mean with the faster pacing, the dialogue at the table does get a bit long. but thanks for the feedback!
Dec 21 2013 8:45PM
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kootenayklaus
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Nicely made.

On the slow-mo of the floor, blood stains, etc at the beginning and a short part at the end, I would have just left that in real time.. IMO the frame blending took away from the cinematic quality of the piece.
Dec 22 2013 3:59PM
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