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Critique my video (Again)

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cyberginger
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Took some advice from my last post, what do you guys think of this video?

Theo Vivian // Early Season At Louise from Distrikt on Vimeo.



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Theo
Dec 4 2013 11:03PM
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big-tink
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Yo you got ill skills and this was a cool edit too
Dec 4 2013 11:11PM
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cyberginger
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Thanks!
Dec 4 2013 11:27PM
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No.Quarter
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Very, very green.
Dec 4 2013 11:35PM
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Forcillo
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Color correction was bad. Don't make everything green.
Dec 4 2013 11:40PM
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cyberginger
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There was no color correction on these clips. Maaybe its a mix of flat light, weird focus, and ISO settings?
Dec 4 2013 11:53PM
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gravel
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Your white balance was probably funky. Next time you go up to the mountain set it to sunlight or auto.
Dec 5 2013 12:54AM
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SCurry
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Defiantly fix the white balance, it will fix the color corrections in the edit and will cause the features to pop out more causing more people to be centered there attention on you. Other than that nice small edit!
Dec 5 2013 1:38AM
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Lou.
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Alright. Pretty damn good. Fix color correction, maybe consider a glidecam or other stabilization (or just film steadier) I didn't like the font you chose at the end and for the opening shot of him hiking up id say cut the part where you zoom. Imo zooming in a video looks stupid. Just cut from far shot to closeup. But really minor mistakes and a solid edit
Dec 7 2013 6:57PM
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